My design process journal for semester 2 and 3 in the Masters Program at Lasalle (www.lasallesia.edu.sg) SIngapore. ~haniah
Thursday, May 31, 2007
Tuesday, May 29, 2007
Thursday, May 17, 2007
On May 11th..
On 5/11/07 7:46 PM, wrote: Haniah Omar
As u know how each truck has 2 personalities, the front (serious & religious) and the back (funny & sarcastic..aphorisms). well the problem is that.. even though there are two personalities.. there are 3 different sides of a bus!
front, back and SIDE (situates the vehicle and contact information)!!! so i cant decide whether to say one truck 2 personalities or one truck 3 personalities!
I asked Nur:
Hey haniah
I think work with the characteristics of the front and back as they
have opposing concepts and that will interest the audience.
Use the side in the book or other materails.
thanks
As u know how each truck has 2 personalities, the front (serious & religious) and the back (funny & sarcastic..aphorisms). well the problem is that.. even though there are two personalities.. there are 3 different sides of a bus!
front, back and SIDE (situates the vehicle and contact information)!!! so i cant decide whether to say one truck 2 personalities or one truck 3 personalities!
I asked Nur:
Hey haniah
I think work with the characteristics of the front and back as they
have opposing concepts and that will interest the audience.
Use the side in the book or other materails.
thanks
Thursday, May 10, 2007
feedback session 2
My feedback session went well i would say, as i was given a lot of feedback. Joslyn and Nur pointed out some very important issues in my documentary. My objective was not so clear, and there were several errors in editing which i needed to look into. Another very important point that i was advised was that my documentary looked one sided, as in only made keeping in mind my own viewpoint. Thus i have been researching on some documentary styles and learning via watching!
here is some of my feedback from Nur,
"Rethink abt your narrative of the documentary. It seems really interesting but very surface and some parts not convincing. Keep it simple.make sure the subtitles are clear. Do interviews more journalistic style. Make sure yr images are of gd quality."
here is some of my feedback from Nur,
"Rethink abt your narrative of the documentary. It seems really interesting but very surface and some parts not convincing. Keep it simple.make sure the subtitles are clear. Do interviews more journalistic style. Make sure yr images are of gd quality."
Tuesday, May 1, 2007
technical stuff driving me crazy!!
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